Wow! This poem is breathtaking. I could hear the stampede and felt the heat, dust and fear. What a relief when the rhinos were gone! Well done, poets…
Wow! Heartfelt piece!
One is left wondering who the rhinos represent here. This is an awesome poem! Congrats!
And what an amzaing choice of words. It gives the poem such rythm and music…
Keep it up!
Clarissa (Brasília, Brazil)
What a fantastic poem about rhinos and a storm. Have you heard about the travelling rhino program run from South Africa? http://saveourrhinos.wikispaces.com/The+Travelling+Rhinos
Well done Mil-Lel this is a fantastic poem. From the 5,6,7 class Moorak
What a great piece of writing! The vocabulary chosen is very effective and creates a vivid picture for the reader.
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